Is what you remember about comma placement necessarily true? Is your manuscript packed with commas? In this article, I refer to The Chicago Manual of Style (CMS) to tackle tricky comma situations and situations where you may think you need a comma but don’t. Keep in mind different style books may have different rules about…
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writing tips, how-tos, and insight on novel writing
The Essence of an Unusual Love Song
Analyzing a well-written story or poem is like going on a treasure hunt. It helps us find hidden gems—symbols and allusions, for example. These translate into messages or story itself. What we learn through analysis can help us hone our craft. We can learn how to bury gems in our own works or do it…
Review: Fiverr (as a source for beta readers)
Fiverr.com is a website where you can find freelancers offering a variety of services. In my case, I hired two beta readers from this site. As well, you can offer your own services here. Navigating Fiverr I navigated the site easily, signing in through my Google account. To find a beta reader, I clicked on…
Conflict
Stories contain action that hooks readers. Conflict propels the action, which eventually leads to a resolution. While a good plot offers readers an escape, it also teaches a lesson. By confronting the external problem, the main character works through an internal issue. The resolution of this emotional conflict changes the course of the hero’s life….
Witchcraft or Rye?
The place was called Salem Village. The year was 1692, when doctors lacked in-depth medical knowledge and religion played a major role in local government. As a result, girls suffering bizarre symptoms were slapped with a diagnosis of “bewitched.” The cure? Find the witches responsible and kill them. The supernatural isn’t the only theory out…
Dashes in Dialogue
The em dash can be a great tool to speed pace and create realistic dialogue. Dash placement matters when formatting dialogue that contains sudden breaks. What causes these breaks? The character who is speaking cuts his own dialogue short. One character interrupts another’s dialogue. The narrator breaks up dialogue. Why It Matters As with other…
More Important or More Importantly?
You’ve probably seen the phrase written both ways. This article discusses more important/ly as an introductory phrase. After reading it, you should have a good grasp of why more important is the best choice. More Important A copyeditor I spent good money on changed an introductory more important to more importantly in my manuscript. Later,…
Literary vs Genre Fiction
On an agents “wish list,” you found the term literary sitting among a hoard of genres. One genre, science fiction, describes your book. However, your story includes literary devices. It holds abstract ideas subject to interpretation. Your main character may fight alien peacekeepers, but he’s on an “internal,” coming-of-age journey. For those reasons, you think…
The Footnote as a Literary Device
Footnotes don’t have to be boring digressions. In fact, they can be quite helpful. Norton anthologies are loaded with footnotes. They shed light on aspects of a work or the circumstances of an author’s time. This gives context to a story, which aids in comprehending and analyzing a work. A dictionary might describe information in…
Novel Beginnings
Story endings often get all the attention. However, it takes a good beginning to motivate a reader to read to the end of a book. Just as an entire story usually has a structure that holds it together, so does a beginning. By “structure” I don’t mean it’s a rigid one. But the beginning shouldn’t…